Second Cut

Having changed the ending, we are still not happy with it. Many things went wrong:

• The POV shot running into the room - pace doesn't fit properly
• Why would the babysitter start to rearrange the room? Doesn't make sense
• CU of doll has more of a comical effect, which is not what we were aiming to achieve
• The noise is strange at the end - doesn't really have a purpose
• When Mel drops the doll, the shot is stange and this ending is boring with no purpose

We are planning a new ending, which will hopefully have better continuity and be less jumpy. Also, it seesm that we didn't thoroughly think about the scene and why things are happening. Hopefully in the next shoot, we will have a better ending. Also, as we will have more time we may be able to get a better variet yof shots that fit together.