Teacher Feedback

We received feedback from Mrs Blackborow, on our most recent edit with titles. The main points were:

• The typewriter sound effect when 'Impact Films' comes up goes on for too long, even after all of the letters have already shown up.
• Also, with the shot of the masked man at the window, she felt that the initial shot from the test shoot worked a lot better and had more of an impact and a grater reaction from the audience. We aim to add this shot into a new timeline and get feedback on which works best.
• The sound of the music box in the child's bedroom was too quiet Miss felt and after adjusting the volume of this, it sounds a lot more effective.
• The over minor detail of the sound was that when in the hallway, it was quite grainy and muffled due to the microphone. We took out the audio on this section, and it also works well.
• The final correction was moving the final title of 'Dark Summer' over a bit so that it does not fase out too soon.

This feedback was very helpful, and Mrs Blackborow was also very happy with our overall sequence.